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                                       Inner storm (A poem of Crona's)

Darkness, thunder and lightning you see,
a huge storm is getting closer,
madness, trouble and what's frightening are eating me,
while people judge wrong, calling me a loser.

What is this pain?
Why is it flowing through my vein?
Is the world on the verge of dying,
or is it me, whom down a dark hole is flying*?  (*meant as falling)


...That's something I've done for too long,
the truth is I don't know how to deal with it,
people tell me to step up and be strong,
but I keep falling, singing the same melancholic song,
over and over, without having a bit
of light and love, simple to everyone else,
which to me, doesn't make much sense...

...One day I think things are gonna get better,
the next one my opinion already changed with anger.

Please, tell me: is there an end,
to suffering, struggling and keeping things in my head?
I only see hell, not knowing where to stand,
my eyes looking downwards, my arms widely spread,
this only to welcome the dead,
because I have my soul in pieces shred.

Will my black blood draw me mad?
Did anyone wonder why they all went into the emo Corner after reading Crona's poem in Soul Eater? Well, give it a good reading and you'll find out.

*goes into the emo corner* :iconforeveraloneplz:

Crona Makenshi is a Soul Eater character, and I do not own the story nor this character.
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for some odd reson, when i was reading this poem...well... twords the second half of the poem i started reading it in my head to the beat of some modern day song (mabey rap, or hip-hop, or some other random a** sh**).
it also gave me the feeling of wanting to eat a squirls head...
chichi-dragon-lover May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
well, at least it didn't send you into the emo corner. XDDDD
im in the emo corner
chichi-dragon-lover Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yeah, now you know, why they all went in the emo corner. XD
to tell you the truth it was kinda funny
chichi-dragon-lover Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sort of. :P
krazykitty123 Feb 19, 2012  Student General Artist
Okay, i read this and the end, it said "When will my black blood drive me mad" and i said "oh, that is so sad" and my friend and I both agreed it said that, knowing it would rhyme with MAD, SAD XDXDXDD
chichi-dragon-lover Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah. XD
That's true. It rhymes itsself. In fact Crona is a very dramatic character, and it fits perfectly. :)
krazykitty123 Feb 19, 2012  Student General Artist
XD so true, I just uploaded a drawing of Kid in my galary, and i almost broke my computer trying to find the right freaking eye color XDXDDD
chichi-dragon-lover Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol! XD
It happens! I'm going crazy because of trying to do all my drawings in a good quality on MS aint. @_@
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